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Warning: Mormor pairing. Gets a little psychotic, but nothing graphic. Some cursing courtesy of our fowl mouthed Seb. Don't wanna ruin anything so please read and then come back to the comments below.



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Ok so I lied a little for suspense purpose. It's MorMorMor xD but I didn't really lie too much because I still kinda feel that he never really loved "Jamie" that much and was still strangely in love with Jim. So just MorMor? maybe?

Sorry if its poorly written. I'm not a very experienced writer and the only other thing before this was my really short fiction "Speak" which everyone surprisingly wants a sequel to. IDK if that will ever happen. OTL Just can't think of anything, but if I do, it will include Sebastian.

So I tried to incorporate in the cannon James Moriarty....the other James Moriarty that was the brother of Jim Dx Rest Arthur Conan Doyle's soul, but he was either the absolute worst with continuity or the biggest troll in all of literature. I tried to explain why they would both be named James, but I feel like I kinda failed a bit. Either way, its for you to decide if that tale was true or not. Or if either of them are really named James Moriarty. Or maybe Seb just dreamt it all *shot*

I hope this doesn't colossally suck. Because if I failed to surprise you in any way, this is fairly lame. OTL I kinda really hated going through the Jamie parts. I really tried rushing through them. I was originally going to have another date with Jamie and Seb to develop their relationship rather than hint at it, but it was getting rather tiring and I just honestly wanted to get on with it, because I didn't want to tell a story about Seb wanting to be normal, I wanted to tell a story of Moriarty tricking Seb and realizing that they are both sick fucks and that hes not exactly normal.

I really don't know. Just grrr. I can't tell. Please leave a comment. Good or bad (hopefully good) I would like to know what I did good and what I did wrong, because although I don't plan on writing too much in the future, I still would like to improve some. Polite critique please! I'll try not to be an asshat in the way I accept it.

There may or may not be art of this depending on how well it goes over :^T

Check out my other Sherlock art and comics!: [link]

Sherlock is owned by BBC (Moffat and Gatiss) and is based off the original tales by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
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LissaTrancy12's avatar
(Arisa) That was awesome